I liked this but I would work on the graphics. Perhaps by watching some tutorials on how to better use the graphical aspect of the engine, or by planning, drawing, out what you would like to see in the game itself. Even if it's just a cute little cartoonish style but still simple. Otherwise this was fairly good and I look forward to seeing what else you come up with :)
OK, thank you so much
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